All Comments on 'The Farm Ch. 06'

by VenusButterflies

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AngelBelleAngelBellealmost 10 years ago
Keep it up!

I loved this chapter it was SO good. I enjoyed how Liam got his revenge and she got to learn more about him. I love that she is still putting up a fight in her mind and the little Vivienne/Liam moments. This was a great, longer chapter. Cannot wait for more and to see what Liam has to say and how he will handle someone else having her. Keep it going!

VenusButterfliesVenusButterfliesalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Re: Keep it up!

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked this chapter, and that you're enjoying the story. :)

AMoveableBeastAMoveableBeastalmost 10 years ago

This is your best chapter yet. The conversation in the middle, about Liam's past, then where the narrator turns introspective, really adds a great deal of depth. Excellent choice and job there.

Then, of course, there is all of the hot, filthy, well-described sex, which was stirring, as always.

VenusButterfliesVenusButterfliesalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Re: AMB

Thank you so much :) Now if I can keep it up for the next chapter . . .

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Love love love

I love love love this series. Please keep it up... I love her reluctance to submit, and lord I just love Liam.

I beg of you to get us the next chapter!!

VenusButterfliesVenusButterfliesover 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you kindly! I have been spread a little thin as of late, but am going to resume working on the next chapter. Shouldn't be too long . . .

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Can't wait!

I truly am holding my breath to read the next chapter! I hope it's not too far away!

ImAlwaysCuriousImAlwaysCuriousover 9 years ago

I want to read what comes next so bad

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Waiting!

Any update on the next chapter? Cant wait!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
desperate

I am addicted to these stories i need more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Next chapter please???

When is the next chapter coming in? I love this story and it's characters!!

sweetone66sweetone66over 9 years ago
Hot story...

When will you submit the next chapter? It's been 7 months since this one and I can't wait to read the next one. Will you be bringing John back into the mix, possibly to buy Vivienne? Or will Viv and Liam end up married to love, fuck, suck and whore ever after? So many possibilities, but only you, the author, knows... bwahahahaha!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
pleaseee update

I'm waiting for sooo long.. please update.. i love liam

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
More? Pretty please?

More please? Do they run off togther? Why set up the dom in the first chapter if he isnt going to come around again?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
****

Write more!!! This is sooo good!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
romance?

Love it, can wait for more

And if you don't mind me saying... I get that this is a non con piece of erotica and I actually have yet to read anything other than typical wham bam thank you ma'am on this site but the blossoming controversial bond between Viv and Liam is in a twisted way kind of sweet and I'm a sucker for romance and HEA's so I'm hoping that that's the direction you'll be developing the story in.regardless I can't wait to see what you do next 😁

AB

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wow this is sone truely fucked up stuff

Really being punished for having a miscarriage. This is well written but sometimes you should ask if some thoughts should be shared with the world and this story is one that is too messed up to be shared in my opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
omg! u need to write faster!!!!<3

Love this series!!!!so good! So bad...but in the good way...havnt been this hooked to a fantastic read in a while!!!!hope youll write more on this series!!!!😃

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
ugh

Why do all the best stories get abandoned? :(

wanderinggipsywanderinggipsyabout 7 years ago
too bad the series got abandoned!! :( ;)

real bad if this series got abandoned!! :(;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More please!

Please continue this series. It is wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Continue This Series!!

This is one of the best stories I have read here and there needs to be a continuation. It’s novel material.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Pleeease continue it!!

I love it! I’ve never wanted a continuation more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

I REALLYY hope the new chapter is coming soon!!! This was incredible!!!

Bfairy95Bfairy95over 4 years ago
Please

Please write more best series so far ever.

Ayanami23Ayanami23over 2 years ago

I see people asked for more of this story years ago! I’m dying for a conclusion!!

LydieAnnaLydieAnnaabout 2 years ago

Please, please continue?? This story is so well written and dynamic and actually fulfills the desires of a more taboo kink.... It's a story that deserves to be told, and your writing is desired.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Even though this story is over seven years old, I feel there should have been a couple more chapters for Closure. It was actually pretty sad that there was light at the end of the road for this story, like some way to Escape this hell of being raped over and over again! But with no Chance of possible escape would give these sex prisoner nothing to live for, even with the brainwashing they were using. Plus what ever happened to her family, friends or John looking for her??

AnonymousAnonymous12 days ago

Please wrap up the story with Liam and Viv finally running away together so that she becomes his slut only. It's apparent that's what they both want.

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