All Comments on 'A Visit From Saint Michael'

Simply eerily wonderful. Reminds me of the really good ancient legends that are told over and over...

Excellent story from top to bottom.

Creepily awesome.

5*s

I particularly liked the many names. Ending and beginning weren't as dynamic as the middle, though I liked the publishing twist very much.

...that Mr. "Technician", you have a very twisted mind.

I love it. Please keep writing.

John

A horror story fit for Halloween. Be assured that I will never read the story out loud.

Technician, your point about the descent from Hefner to.Guxcione to.Flynt is the.most insightful I've seen & agree. The events of Good Driday are a twist on erotic BDSM however. In your other story aboyt aAlice, she may feel emotional release. But theological liveration is spirit & flesh united in frace by Good Friday events, echoed on Halloween, methinks.

unlittle_prince. not site member

Literally deadly Sins.

He made a choice based on what he thought he understood, only to learn how little he knew or understood.

Just like each reader. Our understanding is limited by our knowledge and more importantly our experience.

Because you might just get it.

Very well written, as always. Even when the theme is something I find distasteful the writing deserves 5*

Not sure it is properly classified, but is a fine story. Something of what happened to the girls could have been interesting.