All Comments on 'The Sound Of Leaving'

You could have submitted this into the Erotic section. It had a great buildup without the *happy ending* but sometimes that is the best kind of mind porn.

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That this is one of your best, Tod. Tough guy romantic, that 2nd stanza absolutely perfect. I would say to him next time go for it!

A sensitive, touching and beautiful tribute to more than a friend.

As I read this & I second the comment " tough guy" romance or romantic :5-ed .

I'd cut the last 4 lines but what do I know