All Comments on '120 Days'

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BOSTONFICTIONWRITERBOSTONFICTIONWRITERabout 17 years ago
I liked it

I liked the voice that came through loud and clear in your poem. It is a poem that we can imagine whatever the 120 days represents.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 17 years ago
Learning to wait

You have woken memories of what we uses to call: “the desperation table” counting back how many days are left till we are released of duty, now it’s re- written (from my angle) but from the waiting to the one who should return, side. You reflect so well the agony and the desperation of waiting and counting from almost the end of the tail when there are 116 out of 120 still waiting to be waited. Each an unknown, each guarantees nothing to the next. But you do learn how to wait I guarantee you that. Counting the days from start to end I wonder – is everything ok?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Nice

I am getting ready to go to work and read your poem,as i am

counting down to when my vacation starts.

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 17 years ago
Yes, those too come out at times...

I mean the generic pathetic gutless poster appears from under its rock. Then anonymously (that's a must) it will mock and poke fun (no reasons or logic) or as here under disguise of a compliment - how low can you go? Nameless poster, have you or have you not read the poem? If you have why are you pretending to not having read it by saying that you are getting ready to read the poem? If you have not what are you doing pretending to respond to it?

And what is the comparison to your count down till your vacation and the content of this poem? What exactly is the “nice” referring to? Have you looked into the content of the poem? And if you have, do you care at all? Please roll back to your numb smug tasteless routines. I doubt very much that a vacation will help your shameless insensitivity.

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