All Comments on 'A Cherokee Rose: 'Navajo Rug''

of course, one might inquire how a Cherokee got a Navajo rug.

Kemo-sabe

believe it is tee-pee also.

I'm just nitpickin here (navajo rugs do that to me)

I like, my white brother.

Your end rhyme is strong, good.

these native reads...tickles the palate...and wiggles the toes for sure...brings out my cherokee...blue

Art these new chapters are wonderful! great job!

Kisses,

T

she did it! how cool....great chapter buddy!

Kisses,

T

WOW A GREAT STORY! I love following your tale! S~

EXCELLENT!!! Keep em coming!!! You amase Me more each time!!!

Thankyou ZEN MASTER ART!!!

this was a wonderful journey down an entertaining path.

Before Art goes and fires Me,<squirming in My chair and biting My nails} I have to 'fess up about the mispelling of the word, "tee-pee". I was so engrossed in the tale, I let it slip by the ol' swamp green eyes {bad, BAD Vixxx!}, but in My defense,{breathing a little easier now} I did ask our Fable Man about the detail of a Cherokee having a Navajo rug. He informed Me that the tribes often traded items they were known for and since he IS the author of this series, and I WAS his proofreader { do I still have the job, Art?}, I of course, kept it in the final draft. I LOVE the tale, Art {in spite of My blunders}, and I'm looking forward to the remaining chapters of My adopted child, "Cherokee Rose".

Uhmmm... I'm still your girl Friday, right? {or is it Sunday? - I forget}

Village Idiot Vixxx

A lulling story of a female heroine. The flow of this work is excellent as well as the intrigue of the narrative. Another wonderful development of the "Rose".

Du~

peak.......i can feel it coming on. something intense is about to happen. since i've read the comments here and such, i am 1/8 warrior, so it's great to see the american native come to life in this piece. i will say though, i really dig the navaho rug lucky charm. but i'm wondering if it is a closely cropped rug or is it shag....*LOL*...keep it up...nice work again...!!!.......don

While you have a certain flair for interesting turns of phrases throughout these connected poem, I think the rhyming is childish and overdone. This would be a much more powerful piece if you cut the gradeschool crap and remembered that "less is more." Especially in poetry. There are several places that I would take a red pen and strike it through because you've effectively ruined a powerful thought or emotion. Also, I think it was mentioned before that Native American tribes traded, but it stretches the imagination that a southwestern tribe would come into contact with a midwest/eastern tribe. I am not as informed on tribal customs as perhaps you are, but that argument doesn't seem to ring true to me.

Absolutely wonderful!

Continue the telling of this epic tale;

consistently engrossing, the adventures

of your Cherokee Rose;

and as for the babblings of the cookie-cutter bio troll ~

she can be safely ignored.

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Carry on.....

I wish I craped that well when I was in grade school.