All Comments on 'A Fate of Love'

There are interesting and contradictory facets to this. Fate finds loves lost to change. Nothing is constant but change. So - it follows that love must always be lost to change? Fate fits into that..how? Fate's manifestation is in the first two stanzas. If fate, a Fate is still there in the third Stanza, it is much more subtle. The final stanzas are about how someone experiences the Fate of Love. Then the final stanza changes it again...to Faith. I think there is a lot to work with - and I may be over analyzing it, but I would tighten up the links between the stanzas.

to consider.

Ratio of concrete nouns to abstract. I think I saw a pronoun or two.

The mind works better if the senses are engaged, to use the standard poetic cliche, you are telling not showing.

Despite the fact I would toss this like, it bothers me.

love bring us understanding

The way it is worded, looks like it should be a complete sentence.

I did not vote.

... 'Nothing is constant but change'.

One of the most profound things any philosopher ever wrote. What more is there to say about life?

Shame that Hegel and Marx are so disregarded now.

but the last brings finality. TK U MLJ LV NV