All Comments on 'A Living Cycle'

which I think is really good. Are you consciously pushing yourself to new places in your writing? Seems like you are. This, to me, is just an incredible statement about healing and acceptance. I had to read it a few times to get how well it works. It seemed a bit disconnected at first read--like not enough transition words. But with each reread it seems stronger to me. I think it's a poem that has to sink in on a reader.

Well done!

....with Ange, this has a peaceful, accepting quality to it. Very different from your more intense works. Five.

why Des likes you, these are word blocks, blocks has two meanings, see Ange's comments

I have a negative reaction to this line (I don't know why)

Leave receiving aside

5ed

why not the opposite occur. TK U MLJ LV NV