All Comments on 'ablution'

your poem has been mentioned in today's reviews

...get better and better. Minimalism works well here.

Tess

this is terrific. send it out, get it published or something :)

or not, just a suggestion.

~annaswirls

I am a fan, I am not fond of these two lines, I feel, somehow that they could be better, to match the rest of this.

as a weight of

two worlds