by erectus123
Couldn't get these old eyes to follow the story line without losing my place. Cheers
I enjoy writing in this ballad/story mode, a unique American form (with British roots) as performed by Robert Service a hundred years ago and yet strikingly modern. The fact is, there was an "Alan" and he was a childhood friend and although there is some poetic license here, he did kill his mother under these exact circumstances. I used to tussle with him at fisticuffs etc. but I never made the mistake to criticize his dish washing skill.
As we grow up we are forced to leave many behind but I chose to remember some of that forgotten legion of lost souls so they may not be forgotten.....
What a story Erectus -----Sex'n Violence can be showcased in a Tarantino Movie ! Well Done !!