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- Alone and Free
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I'll take everything with a grain of salt.
And I'll take you.
We collapsed,
exploded,
Until the gravity of fate
Began pulling a new me
Towards a future, unknown
I expect no guarantee
And I decide for myself
I'm free, I'm happy
Living alone is fine by me.
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njoyjadealmost 11 years agoSad, well done
I really like "the gravity of fate began pulling a new me"
I can relate!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoexcuse me but I found poem cliched and not very profound
uneven punctuation, I know you can do better
