by twelveoone
1201 you have the ultimatley perfect mind. Immesurable intelligence and the most delightful wit. This is great!! well deserved E!!!!
this is a perfect example of your cynical side, sense of humor and eye so tuned in to what goes on. Thank you for sharing your poems with us here!
I am not sure why it is an anti-gaki, though. this is the gaki of the year. :)
Okay, I'm speechless. Which is good, since I'd have to say something nice to you if I wasn't.
100 for 1201
on a scale 1 to 10 = 10 <grin>
green "E" for excellent
I was anonomoyous (I love spelling that wrong)
I might be tarred and feathered now!
why do I have to log back in ?
annaswirls
This poem rocks, sounds as good as it reads.
Now I'm gonna HAVE to read that damned thread. Very nice work! ~Imp
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.
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I know it's not the same, I was just reminded, and from what I heard it happens to other guys. His pace her pace; His expectations, her expectations; his language and hers what turns him on and what turns her of.
All I know about gaki is what I read in the thread (thanks). I know little more about semiotics. This girl might be too verbal for our guy. He did not realize she actually gave him an opening there (pun intended).
I guess I'd be fishing for words, too...
Utagaki: "Closely associated with harvest rites, and therefore fertility, these events often also led into much free sexual activity." Just forget the poems, wait for the sake to hit and join the mob.