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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice Read!

You did a great job of expressing the characteristics of the woman, but was perhaps a little lacking in describing the man's actions or personality. Good poem, though.

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I'm the DILF you run into at work, the store, or at our kids events. I've aged well and keep fit. I'm creative by nature, writing is one of my artistic outlets. Recently I've been revisiting my erotic side. I had a long hiatus due to real life getting in the way. I assur...