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DawnJover 11 years agoWhat a difference a dash makes!
" -- and yet..." What a turning point in thought! What a contrast in tone and imagery! And what a poignant poem!
twelveooneabout 11 years ago5ed
The light's not quite the same. -good opener, reader asks why
the sun's like liquid brass, like golden fire
sustaining the bright dome, the deep blue glass
of self-sufficient space – nice!
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