All Comments on 'Attar of Spring'

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thanks for the journey~

for Me with this morning's piece. I quote, "Self doubt invades the soul when separated from the love that makes us whole". The essence of this verse is piquant; simplistic, yet the fragrance lingers with metaphoric pungency through the balance of the work. I especially enjoyed walking down this path with you today. Thank you!

Vixxx

throughout this piece and offers me revel in the mix of the reflective and of the present. that is my take...could be wrong. these lines are my faves:

Self doubt invades the soul

when separated from the love that

makes us whole.

"The person old in days won't hesitate

to ask a little child seven days old

about the place of life, and that person will live.

This really is a good poem. Thanks for sharing it.

It is amazing what you can do with words. Like a couple of the others I loved the 'Self doubt invades...' stanza.

Spring is a religious experience!

ty,bd

Setting aside for the moment the other images contained herein, I prefer to focus on the element of rebirth embodied in Spring. Very nicely done.

Lovely rendering with picturesque images.