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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
BLADES

Bitter Lessons in Adoration, Devotion, Eros and Sacrifice - very clever kitteh.

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago
intense

All of life's a lesson, learn and grow, accept and move forward, grieve and forgive.

friend40friend40over 10 years ago
Interesting

Liked it.

oneiriaoneiriaover 10 years ago
Very beautiful

The language of this poem is very beautiful, and the acronym is great.

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

"When my heart was broken/yet a beat was heard" haunting...

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
You paint

Or should I say carve a haunting darkness, the language as Oneiria said is beautiful

I stumbled on

Without in the hesitation of my actions ?

Still a five and the acronym is a poem in itself :-)

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