All Comments on 'Back to me.'

Thank you for this. There is no possible way for me to adequately describe my fascination with this poem. Brilliant.

is distracting, but I found the message worth digging for.

~Syn

Very well done, Rika. The very fact that you had to decipher the message that was right in front of you acts as the perfect metaphor for life *and* for poetry. I am very, very impressed. Luck, Yui

Intriguing format and even more intriguing message. Both bold and vulnerable, defiant and thoughtful. Thanks, Rika. LJ

This is one which one cannot skate over Lady J got it right on the button

Perfectly captures the angst of wanting to be known and appreciated. ~Imp

A different kind if idea that requires that you get it just right to pull it off. And you did. Well done..

A very unique way to express very common feelings. It really asks that the observer look closely, concentrate and notice every aspect. Interesting!

That was really cool...I got confused at first, since I have a headache and I was thinking, "Are my eyes going crazy!?!" But I thought this was really awesome!

~Honey

I found your poem sad, to read so much suffering in the hidden words, make my heart ache for you. I hope you bounce back soon and find someone worth your affection!

Wonderful Poem--made my mind work-and that was great-Thanks!!TD

Ohhhhh

The eye strain.

I think you might be able to get a prescription for what ails you.

After two years of painful suffering ~ a desire to say goodbye seems a natural decision.

w hob utw hat TK U MLJ LV NV