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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A soulful poem

I loved this poem. I thought this was a very deep and emotional poem. The last line in particular was extremely soulful in its imagery.

Brilliant stuff

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Schweeetttt !!!

Ya gotta love them eh ~

I love your imagery and your lil angel

in da waterless tub .. grins*

Maybe a rubberDuckie might help

... or a slide ... Lol

More Please `

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

So sweet in all her innocence,

how ever can you argue

with her impeccable reasoning,

so logical is its power ~

can see so well,

her plaintiff, soulful look - well done here

on this light piece.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
groan

it pained me to read this.Surely you can do better.

TrollyTrollyabout 18 years ago
From Under the Bridge

I have to agree with the previous commentor.

"She lets loose and (sic) angry sigh"

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
decision

Ah...the joys of Mother and daughter having a little one-sided discussion.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
AN LISTENING I REPLY

your too small/little for a shower. TK U MLJ LV NV

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