All Comments on 'Bedroom'

by demure101

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DawnJDawnJabout 11 years ago
Poignant and resigned!

You evoke the sense of despair so well here! I feel the speaker's pain.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
5ed

Reddish leaves and sand

come rustling past -nice, red rustle, question the suffixes, i know one is a

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