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All Comments on 'Belmont Park Hotel'

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live4passionlive4passionover 12 years ago
evocative

juxtaposition of sound texture color.. quite successfully done. Welcome back, long time no see.

kokshurkokshurover 12 years ago
five stars

i liked it. gave it five stars. i did find the final quote inconsistent with the rest of the plotline. hey, check out my tanka style poem "exhibition"

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
IS THE CROP

passive or active, TK U MLJ LV NV

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