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Anonymousover 10 years agoI like the movement of this, start to finish, but I agree with 1201, could be pared down.
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tazz317over 10 years agoTHE TITLE FITS THE ULTIMATE CONCLUSION
which is what we all have in common, TK U MLJ LV NV
twelveooneover 10 years ago5ed
re the structure, only supports so much
cut it back a little, to many, to many words, nice variation the one word as a span between blocks
just my take
Desejoover 10 years agoThis one doesn't feel done to me. The last three stanzas don't follow what I thought was being set up. Maybe I don't understand it.
Ashesh9over 10 years agoMemories ....good , bad or neutral are only ...
Illusions in the Cosmic Web of Maya
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