All Comments on 'Bluesman'

I'm flattered that you wrote a blues sonnet that mine helped to inspire (I saw your comment on the forum). As usual, you get the form just right: I love the way you flow sentences across lines. The only nitpick I have is with the word "gentle." It's not that it's wrong, but it's not one I'd immediately associate with blues musicians or playing the blues. I think you could find a better adjective for that spot, but maybe that's me. The blues I hear in this are old-style traditional Delta blues. You'll have to tell me if that was your intention.

Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Reviews thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

The sonneteer is on a roll here. You've got some really good line breaks on this one; they pull the reader along the way the sentences are split between lines while giving added emphasis to the thoughts you choose to express with these splits. IMHO, this is one of your better ones. Kudos.

and feel the music within. TK U MLJ LV NV