All Comments on 'Bull Feathers & Chocolate'

Great pseudonym. Thank you for your feedback; I'm flattered. I may have some words for your work too. :)

This poem, like many of yours, takes me on a ride to a destination I never can anticipate. I get lost in your poetry. I stumble into walls, tear apart words and phrases that echo confounding reverberations I can’t quite place-- while carefully placed silences glimmer with hints. For Instance, I love how the reader is dropped into the work as if from a vacuum; the poem roars ahead, while my mind is lost in space. I read and listen for traditional markers, but am left with the directions of my own imagination... and the desire to come back to it. Great work!

I love how you twist and turn a phrase.