by Sir_Nathan
That was absolutely amazing. I am a cocsukcer extraordinaire and this made me crave the one cock I could worship for the rest of my life.
It is long and thick and tastes sooo good....ohhhh yummy
Thank You so much Sir!
wow
Sir Nathan, You had me throbbing along with the narrator of this story. *smiling* thank You Sir. i have to run now and take care of.....
*chuckles* okay, I should really check these comments more often lol. Thanks for them. I guess there is a little of "Be Mine" in this, and yes, it's hardly a poem, but it was rejected as a short story by Lit (for being TOO short)and I thought, "Fuck it", so here it is. And that's the story of this "poem". *smiles*
SN
Love the detail...Love how you love it.
Your enjoyment of this special art is what makes you so sexy.
I seem to enjoy every inch of this ;-) . Its a good poem but with an imagination like mine it took it over to a great peom....
This was well written and took me right to her roll immediately. Loved it!
Soooo ready for a taste of that now. Some of us dirty girls love sucking cock
but we don't have to be called dirty cocksuckers etc. and all the rest of the one sided chauvinistic dribble. That so many favored this poem speaks poorly of the immature readers. This is not erotic, it is SICK.
OK OK just unzip your fly, I going in for a suck but don't you dare call me a cocksucker or I will take a good bit of Mr. Long
I actually thought this was satire because of how disgustingly chauvinistic it is. It perfectly addresses everything that is wrong with a lot of porn and the way some men are capable of treating women like they are less than human.
After reading comments I see this is not the case. Disgusting.
...are you kidding me? I creamed my panties reading this! Such a great short read! I really like most of your stuff here on this site. Keep writing, and I'll keep enjoying your efforts, Sir.
Yeah, it sounds so familiar. what you told her to do and the way you did her. all the things you said, which was nicer than what i hear. that doesn't really matter though, i like it dirtier. Yeah, Its good for me. I liked it and hadn't seen/heard it in a while, the term "precum". we(me & hubby) thought we were the only ones to use it. so thanks.