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by annaswirls

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bflagsstbflagsstabout 15 years ago
My buddy worked for Cutco

he was a shill. He said he wasn't promoted because he wouldn't go to church with the management. "lock jaw life." is a good line, perhaps "jawed" would work slightly better?

Imaginary_friendImaginary_friendabout 15 years ago
somehow

this reminds me of my dad tossing me into the pool at n early age and telling me to sink or swim. I like your attitude and how you present yourself with your poetic voice. Good work.

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 15 years ago
I'm........

....intimidated by your ability to put a modern spin on forms so smoothly. <SMALL>(I hate you)</SMALL><P>

Not really.<P>

Tess

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 15 years agoAuthor
I fixed the meter

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=30524865&posted=1#post30524865

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