All Comments on 'Devour me'

when i'm turned into liquid, a pool of desire!! well said..

Honey, your poems are very good...they touch you inside like any good book or poem. I was very impressed with your writing...Haven't read any of your stories, but if they are as good...wow.

Sincerely

ncman_01@yahoo.com

Very sensual, erotic poetry.

I wish someone felt for me like that. Again, I really liked this one.

very erotic imagery .. YESSS

Loved 'held captive by your eyes' & 'a second may be too long'...everything in between was great, but the opening grabbed my attention and the end slapped me upside my head demanding I not forget what I just read. With men it is sometimes neccesary to take extreme measures.

TY, BD

Incredibly hot and tempting....

So so hot an lingering...

I will be sure to read it again and again!

great poem

Been there. You captured so much, so eloquently. Well done! ~Imp

Very nice, honey.

Very erotic, and very romantic.

Your eyes, tho,

would be the ones, I think,

who take captives.

Capture me sometime!

When only steps

separate us,

and a second

may be too long.

I know that feeling. Yep, I definately know that feeling and Honey captured it perfectly with only a few words.

I love it. It just feels so right. Especially the part about eyes. Why do I have to lose all sense of time or decorum in those damn eyes?

(1) your a poet...I didn't know it.

(2) Devour me was tantalizing and scrumptious...

(3) I liked your poem, endearing and poetic.