All Comments on 'Don't Worry, I'm Use to It'

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HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
I like this

Sometimes it's easy to forget that girls/women are just as confused as boys/men

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Suggestions

On the title:

"Don't Worry, I'm Used to It"

This line:

""I have to put a couple of other"

And, just for your consideration, possibly dropping the final letter in the last word of the poem. It would change the sound slightly, and the meaning also.

Five.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
lots of nice sentiment here, although a bit self serving

for the protagonist, but nice as it stands

"I have to putting a couple of other" assume this is a typo?

two-2

too-also

to- adds action to go, to eat, to write

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