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Ashesh9over 10 years agoPoignancy & Mundaneness of Life coalesce into an unforgettable acquaintance : writin' this
Poem is Therapy / Solace for the soul .....!
Kiki_catover 10 years agoPoignant
Nice poem. Especially the two burnt voodoo dolls - that really twisted it in. Why Face Fuck Book? 5 stars.
erectus123over 10 years agoAuthorkiki, this is one of a series of 70-80 poems-- Face Fuck Book
where the protagonist tells of people he has known, as if found on FB, however since most of the people mentioned were in intimate relationships, hence the FFB to denote the sexual aspect of the relationship--best regards, er
twelveooneover 10 years agoIf I get the time
I will post this as a one of the best examples on subverting linearity , it is that good, as regards to pacing, and to the fact that the reader CANNOT get to the end before you let him. Always a good thing.
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erectus123@erectus123 Personal Bio Notes: I was born in Belfast, passing through my dear mother's loins, and that is where I find most comfort, passing through with other women, not my mother. I survived through the years of Irish troubles and immigrated to the USA after various family tragedies...
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