by erectus123
I will post this as a one of the best examples on subverting linearity , it is that good, as regards to pacing, and to the fact that the reader CANNOT get to the end before you let him. Always a good thing.
where the protagonist tells of people he has known, as if found on FB, however since most of the people mentioned were in intimate relationships, hence the FFB to denote the sexual aspect of the relationship--best regards, er
Nice poem. Especially the two burnt voodoo dolls - that really twisted it in. Why Face Fuck Book? 5 stars.
Poem is Therapy / Solace for the soul .....!