tagNon-Erotic PoetryForever Lost

Forever Lost

bysexygirl76©

I am lost on a sea; a sea of sorrow and pain by my own doing.
There is no land or end in sight.
Is there an end to the pain I feel inside?
I know not.
I hurt so much that I just want it all to end,
Yet I cannot.
They tell me there is too much to live for; there is happiness to be found;
Where? I find it, then I lose it yet again.
Is there an end to my pain? Is there an end to my suffering?
Is there a way to end the pain without ending it all?
I know not.
I live with the pain, I live with the joy, I live with the sorrow.
Sometimes they all balance, sometimes they do not…
Is there an end to the pain and sorrow?
I know not.
Where is the end of the rainbow they tell me is there?
Why can I not find it?
Why can I not find the complete happiness that they tell me I deserve?
I know not.

Report Story

bysexygirl76© 1 comments/ 1904 views/ 0 favorites

Share the love

Report a Bug

1 Pages:1

Please Rate This Submission:

Please Rate This Submission:

  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
Please wait
Recent
Comments
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous03/02/15

Ugh

There is too much whining in the narrative to allow for any empathy from the reader. The author doesn't seem in touch with pain, rather the idea of what they think it would be to feel pain. It's genericmore...

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Show more comments or
Read All User Comments  or
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel