All Comments on 'Green Man'

not bad, but not quite original

theme-wise, but it's delving a little deeper than plenty written on the topic manage... what i think you create here, MI, is a sort of pastoral, clean, springlike feel with your write. it leaves me with a scent of fresh air in my nose, looking for rabbits...

i prefer the second half, and particularly those last two lines.

you've a missing apostrophe in winters if you meant it as a singular winter you refer to (as i'm thinking you did); a plural would require a comma after 'winters'. i don't feel you need as much punctuation as you've used, but that's definitely a personal taste thing. keep writing, MI - you are growing with each piece!