All Comments on 'Guillotine'

to a painless suicide. TK U MLJ LV NV

A metaphorical kill can be worse than the real kind.

Tread carefully ~ our relationship is in jeopardy ~ all it takes is one slip to destroy it. Nicely illustrated with a drawing of a Guillotine. In the hurt of reality lurks an ever present danger.

i found the poem stirring and quite interesting, that unnecessary emotions are such a threat, and . i also liked the reflective separation of self, questioning is it worth it. . only you can answer that for your self. nice drawing ,complimented the poem well.

Great poem! Very nice dark mood. Like the drawing, too.

(To previous commenter: psst, poems doesn't usually have sequels...)

please don't write a sequel....LOL!