All Comments on 'Heroin Fairy Tale'

fresh and new, dark and silent screaming from iside every closet I ever had. I love your descriptions :)

in it's rambling, repetitve, ueven beat of some drug induced memories of my own. Interesting, vivid, dark and humorous. And for some reason I'm not sure of, I found it arousing. Great read. Thanks DA

A weird and wonderful tale scribbled on blotter paper. I loved the juxtaposition of twisted fantasy with the solid reality of the car ride. well done!

one trippy road trip!

ahhh, life's a fuzzy peach!

yes, some trippy images, and an interresting read. But first and foremost a poem about the power of conversation and connection. Impressive.

very " Dharma Bum-ish" to me my friend

excellent work

Thank you

...because I hated it when it was said to me. But, here goes: Though I truly enjoyed this, I think it has great potential as prose. Though it reads so very well, I found myself wondering "why a poem?"

"And you'll dress up in

nineteen fifty

elegance"

Out of this entire piece, I don't know why I liked these lines in particular, but they made my eyes sparkle. you'r soooooooo dreeeeaaaamy! *laughs* I'm really diggin' this one. It's charming in that 'not supposed to be charming' way. The way it runs on draws you into the story being told instead of boring you to death.... diggin' it.

light

R~~~

I rarely, rarely save a poem but this one I'm saving.

Thanks for writing it and sharing it.

Love,

Eve

makeshift

shapeless

inorganic

crime scene

one to recite

silently

on the bus ride

i'm anticipating.

This is fabulous - I can so see an old friend speaking this to me while we chainsmoked on a roadtrip.