by JWren
check the mirror 1st then rephrase...TK U MLJ LV NV
Many thanks for reading and leaving comments. Much appreciated and I'm heartened that you managed to get to the very last word. The outcome: I'll chew over your suggestion
...I was deeply into it until the very last word. IMHO 'outcome' sounds too clinical, non-conversational, detached. Try "sad end" or 'landslide' or something with an image, not just a conclusion -- that's my suggestion.
Thank you, kind lady, for your time and words of encouragement.
Love is a many splendid thing . . . but it can also be damn painful and mentally devastating. Lost love, rejection and separation: all happen, far too much. Many, many thanks for taking time to read my first offering in this section. And many, many more thanks for your kind words, much appreciated.
I wonder if communication might be the ultimate answer to your questions
I wonder if these questions have been asked of the only person that can truly answer them?
I have been left wondering...and wanting more of your sad poem
Thank you for sharing