by JWren
I wonder if communication might be the ultimate answer to your questions
I wonder if these questions have been asked of the only person that can truly answer them?
I have been left wondering...and wanting more of your sad poem
Thank you for sharing
Love is a many splendid thing . . . but it can also be damn painful and mentally devastating. Lost love, rejection and separation: all happen, far too much. Many, many thanks for taking time to read my first offering in this section. And many, many more thanks for your kind words, much appreciated.
Thank you, kind lady, for your time and words of encouragement.
...I was deeply into it until the very last word. IMHO 'outcome' sounds too clinical, non-conversational, detached. Try "sad end" or 'landslide' or something with an image, not just a conclusion -- that's my suggestion.
Many thanks for reading and leaving comments. Much appreciated and I'm heartened that you managed to get to the very last word. The outcome: I'll chew over your suggestion
check the mirror 1st then rephrase...TK U MLJ LV NV