- Erotic Poetry
- How come
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Click hereHow come when you said the vows
you said them lovingly with a smile?
How come when you broke them
you did it angrily with a scowl?
How come this difference
from there to here?
How come you've changed
and I live in fear?
How come I used to be
your rock?
How come you now despise
my cock?
How come you no longer
want me?
How come you insist on
being free?
How come I'm so wrong,
what did I do?
How come you changed
from being you?
How come those old vows
now mean nothing?
How come you've decided
to stop loving?
How come, how come, we've
reached this outcome?
- COMMENTS
tazz317over 9 years agocheck the mirror 1st then rephrase...TK U MLJ LV NV
JWrenover 9 years agoAuthorMany thanks for reading and leaving comments. Much appreciated and I'm heartened that you managed to get to the very last word. The outcome: I'll chew over your suggestion
Hypoxiaover 9 years ago...I was deeply into it until the very last word. IMHO 'outcome' sounds too clinical, non-conversational, detached. Try "sad end" or 'landslide' or something with an image, not just a conclusion -- that's my suggestion.
JWrenover 9 years agoAuthorThank you, kind lady, for your time and words of encouragement.
JWrenover 9 years agoAuthorLove is a many splendid thing . . . but it can also be damn painful and mentally devastating. Lost love, rejection and separation: all happen, far too much. Many, many thanks for taking time to read my first offering in this section. And many, many more thanks for your kind words, much appreciated.
HoneyAdoredover 9 years agoI wonder if communication might be the ultimate answer to your questions
I wonder if these questions have been asked of the only person that can truly answer them?
I have been left wondering...and wanting more of your sad poem
Thank you for sharing
