by average gina
This is wonderful and very strong. You express the mourning perfectly. Thank you for giving us your poem.
Gina, I have to say ..
This poem just reached in an grabbed my heart.I think you did a wonderful job on this poem.I just felt it speed thru me and touch every spot.Almost in tears with the grief I see here.
So touching and lovley. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. It truly touches the soul.
Hello gina,i just had to say i have and still feel the pain you are going through right now.I only wish i could say the words you need to hear,but i have not got them.I do however feel that putting it in writing may help you live through it all.With all of that said ,i believe that this is pain put to true and beautiful words.I am glad that you felt that you could share this pain,wonderful writing.God bless Gina.
Hootie....
Its painful to read that, which means it is good. I am right there with you in your sentiments and feelings. Regardless, I am glad she didn't take you with her.
I can totally relate to this poem. I have felt this kind of grief myself. A very touching poem.
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