All Comments on 'I Dream'

Such timing of this one. I travel a lot for work and I'm leaving today for Germany. My 10yo daughter came to me last night asking me not to go. Don't know how many weeks I'll be gone so this was very poignant for me. Very nice!

I wanted to pass over it and just say there's no value, but it was reminiscent of late 19th century french symbolists/sentimentalists... Pre-paul verlaine and such. Anyway, good job, your poem bums me out as it was supposed to. Though I didn't give it a full 100 cuz it wasn't really fresh.