All Comments on 'I Want To Be Your Man'

I crave the opiate of your breath

that has brought strong men trembling

for you attentions. I want to feed

and feast upon your addictions.

*****

nice piece seattle......don

Powerful, lean, rich, and evocative. Very fine work.

This is a good topic, men claim they would love to be women and would be sluts <grin> and then women want to be men...well that's your poem <grin> I enjoyed your write.

want to be in 20 degree weather, to chill this HEAT ... *winks*.... this is by far a most splendid performance of writing and thoughts, and prevoking thoughts.. and touching thoughts, O' my, I do believe it is hot in here.. I loved it ... every line, and it is un.for.get.a.ble. sweetest peaches to ya'.. sGp

could you change the words, a little and sing it to me, maybe it's me, the un's seem to undulate and make it unforgetable

Well done. I can relate well to the sentiment.

Your poem was mentioned in today's reviews.

Rather nice, as expected, but I am confused be two "you"s. The first wants an "r" I think, and the second an "'re" or at least a comma does it not?

"for you attentions."

"You my always untouchable "

Love it!

With a mind like this

you can be anything you want;

Enjoy!

Loved this write SR,

very sensual and erotic.

You make writing look

so easy and effortless.

Really enjoyed this piece.

Nice work hun,

~ JC

wonderful.

i wish i could write like that.