tagNon-Erotic PoetryIf you have to work......

If you have to work......

byAshesh9©

If you have to work on a poem
Is it not poetry
Must it all come in a blindin' flash-- a jiffy ?
What sayeth Tazz , Tzara or Tess
GM , Demure , 1201 , Des ?!?
Harry , Todski , Erectus --
Give us your views --'twill help us
Must it all come in a blindin' flash or jiffy ----
If one has to work hard on his or her poem
Is it not , Dear Reader , poetry ???

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by twelveoone07/26/13

Ash

you do a lot of things right, but you do have a real tendency to go off with bad ideas, in America there is a phrase 'running with scissors' i.e. don't, walk, sit down and use the scissors. Think, edit.I'vemore...

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by Desejo07/25/13

Ash, you are going to make me feel old and grouchy in answering this. I think poetry a combination of inspiration and work, self questioning, and editing. Sometimes, if you are really lucky, it can comemore...

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by Ashesh907/25/13

Thanx to all who have commented & i hope some more comments also come in......

& it feels great to be simultaneously assessed as a devil & a philosopher !!! Must have done somethin' right , guys !!

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by HarryHill07/25/13

Well, my 10cents, (it's getting more expensive to comment , metaphorically)

Poetry IS work. ...but, there are times it just pours from somewhere inside you; that is the creative side and perhaps the most honest side of the, dare I say, craft. Some are better at paring away themore...

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by twelveoone07/25/13

Ash

you're a fucking devil, mean that as. it this, yes! You're wasting your time on Tazz.
taz is a bot. NSA sends out to see if any poetry is being done.....
serious answers
Must it all come in a blindin'more...

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