All Comments on 'In Pleasure, In Pain'

by Cinner

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
WHICH GIVES THE MOST

or who receives the most. TK U MLJ LV NV

FrostyZenFrostyZenalmost 12 years ago
Don't know much...

at all about anything poetic but i know what i like. This was sexy and sensual.

CinnerCinneralmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you for your kind comment FrostyZen! It's my first positive review ever! :o)

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 12 years ago
So lovely.

Thank you, and keep writing. Please.

CaraDaileyCaraDaileyalmost 12 years ago
Wow

I can't express just how erotic and interesting I found this poem. Very moving. Keep up the great work!!!!!!

CinnerCinneralmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thanks to Cara and Scotsman. I still don't understand the other comment, I've spent days trying, but thank you for reading my poem. I really do appreciate you taking the trouble. :o)

njoyjadenjoyjadealmost 12 years ago
Well done.

I like the style. I never thought to compare "scooping honey from the comb", pretty cool. I've had trouble understanding the same "other comment" issue pertaining to some of my submissions, but decided to stop spinning my wheels. :)

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