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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
nice attempt at classical poem

mouth less = mouthless (is one word)

Hades way= Hades' way (possessive)

also assorted lack of punctuation detracts

Haphaestion2004Haphaestion2004about 9 years ago
Hey !

I'll be honest and say that though poetry is not my thing, I liked this poem better than I thought I would ....

The theme is a bit bleak, but then the poem IS about death and judgment, so ...

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Back again after a long hiatus, hoping to stay up to date. Feel free to email me with a kick up the behind if necessary. I am 6ft1 with ginger hair and blue/green eyes. There is nothing i love more than sitting down with a good book or working on my stories.