All Comments on 'leap free'

a hexagon of terror

she plops into the pond

(see preceding poem)

less write, more thought, more comments todski

i got to the end before you did, i.e. predictable

5ed but just so you get used to it

the precipice is obviously a metaphor for decision

thanks for the smile 1201. I was going to put a flippant remark that we were actually out bunjee jumping and she was scared of heights hence the tears, however I didn't allude to any of that so how would you know?

(above comment is for joke only, this piece is tired and predictable as stated)

A good piece but slightly cold and unemotional for the subject. You're really showing progress todski, well done.

the compliments I am actually going to start thinking I might be good at this stuff :-p