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the Wolf ate the Original Granny & pretended to be a Granny to attack Red Ridin' Hood & in this poem a She-Wolf Wannabe is praisin' Grandma's pure Uncompromisin' Love --- God/ Allah / Yahweh be Praised for the Metamorphosis of Granny Eaters into Granny Fans !!!

This would be much more powerful in some free verse composition. Lots of good stuff are lost in the choppy lines and cheesy rhyme.

I did like the write though.

Harry

i wrote this poem when i was 13 so it's a little childish. however i felt that i should leave it like it is... in honor of the younger me.

Grandma's and Mommys. TK U MLJ LV NV

After reading your blog and between the lines, I hope your Mom and Grandma lived a long fruitful life with your interaction with them. Respectfully tk u mlj lv nv

What blog?

thank you and anyone else that look the time to read and vote. tazz you were very close although it wasn't the loss of my mother and grandmother that prompted this poem. when i was nine i lost my father and several other ones i love in diffrent ways, my mom and grandma were my rock and my guiding light. they helped me be strong when i didn't know i had it in me. and thank you for the respects i really do like that you understood the underlying loss in the poem. not many people would have read that deeply into it. ya'll make me smile =)