All Comments on 'Love and Loss'

Sorry to hear of your loss. As for the poem, very smooth rhyming. Well done.

Is it a week and 3 days

It must be more

1000 times

I've been at your door

You have been with me

These last ten days

With me in my mind

Though its mostly haze

You can't take more

I understand, I know

What's wrong with me

I can't just go

You have left a space

Not empty or fire

But full of love

Hope and desire

I love you now

I always will

Till my mind is gone

And my body still