All Comments on 'Love of Animals'

I love your vignettes. Yeah, part of that is probably because I want to BE a character in many of them. I like the wildness of the imagery, and the place within it of the characters. Well done.

This is an excellent poem and getting a recommend. However I agree with Espie, the choice of words is wrong with the tone of this poem. I also have one other pick point; 'Galaxies whirled in their eyes' seemed off key with the concrete nature of this poem. Got 5 from me.

Very well done....love the directness and being straightforward ;)

Five.

yeh, but a good title for it, otherwise I would agree with es.

100

you always go for directness. IMHO, you could use more subtlety in some word choice (Butt--tits--fucked; need, breasts, loved), but overall, good work.