All Comments on 'Made For Him'

thank you so much for making the time to share your feedback about my work. it means a lot to me and i appreciate it very much.

I would cut or revise the first, didactic stanza. But the next 2 could stand alone as the entire poem. The rib/hand-cupping lines were especially memorable.

Poetry isn't my normal genre, but I read one of your comments you wrote on a story, and searched out some of your work. I found that if I just read the poem as a story I was missing out of the true feeling of the work, so I reread it several times until I felt the tempo of what you wrote, and then I began to understand the written word. Thanks for the lesson in enjoyment. On another item I just wanted to say WOW as to the picture on your biography page. Sexual but not nasty, with one of the nicest butts. Thanks .......Rich