All Comments on 'Maritime Licks'

I do like this poem, but I would space it differently (what else is new). I think your opening would be much stronger if you didn't separate the conclusion of the thought and wrote it like:

"I want to live

by the ocean,

so that I can

lick the salt

off your skin."

To me, that is a great opening statement.

I seem to be throwing fives around like confetti today.....and you, sir, are on a roll.

Tess

I live ten minutes from the ocean. :D

I read your Sig line, and thank god I did, what a hot hot hot poem, if I walked across this poem I would have burned the very soles of my feet, but I read it and burned the feet of my soul.

oh my

I liked that

:patting own self on back in giddy pleasure

seducing me! *grins* very potent indeed :rose: