by darkmaas
One of the best of the day
Surely the best of the
erratic erotic
offering
A good read
the set up of this scene, background, fx, and the cast?great work. (Poor figs, they are so over-looked as a fruit, but they are tasty in jam on toast.)
i don't believe i've read you writing before.
this was a pleasant place to start.
very nice romantic piece!
xo, fawnie
Darkmaas... it's nice to hear you again. Made me think of New Orleans in December. Thank you.
I loved in this your use of simple but evocative language and images. I also liked the wistfulness implied in the ending. This is haunting.