All Comments on 'Naked Fig'

by darkmaas

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YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
To give a fig

One of the best of the day

Surely the best of the

erratic erotic

offering

A good read

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Enjoyed

the set up of this scene, background, fx, and the cast?great work. (Poor figs, they are so over-looked as a fruit, but they are tasty in jam on toast.)

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
..i love to share food with a lover.

i don't believe i've read you writing before.

this was a pleasant place to start.

very nice romantic piece!

xo, fawnie

BooMerengueBooMerenguealmost 20 years ago
!

Darkmaas... it's nice to hear you again. Made me think of New Orleans in December. Thank you.

PandoraGlittersPandoraGlittersover 15 years ago
Gorgeous

I loved in this your use of simple but evocative language and images. I also liked the wistfulness implied in the ending. This is haunting.

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