All Comments on 'Night Thoughts'

This piece makes me miss the south in the summer, nix the fire ants though. Nicely done. ;)

has me wanting to hug you and tell you it will be alright! There is alot of emotion in your words which makes the reader feel as if he/she is right there with you...

~Honey

This is very good sack. I felt the spiraling of all the fluid emotional moments. Silent screams trapped in the mind... ty for the write

du lac~

Well captured. Nicely done, sack. ~Imp

Great southern style poetry here.

Are you sure you are not from the South?

Love the imagery here. The quiet effortless

way you slide us into your world or dreams, and a few demons.

Ours is always to question life. Always questioning ... When? Live each day

as if it were you last has become my motto.

Love this poem ~!!

Is the quiet night time where thoughts meander through our brain ~ thoughts of future love - our future death meant to prepare us for that final journey into that good night?