All Comments on 'Ode To June'

Beautiful.. thank you for sharing

Very impressive. I particularly enjoyed the musicality when read slowly. I hadn't picked up on that at first.

Even absinthe without the e is exactly right. I haven't anything critical to offer. Enjoyable on several levels.

Very impressive. I can see your musical, lyrical influence here.

And you are asking me for advice and encouragement... Perhaps I should be asking you! ;-)

Great start. Keep writing. Can't wait to see what else you come up with.

Thank you for your kind words and compliments. I will soon be posting some poetic/song lyrics in the near future along with my first short story. Lyrics often fall short when not accompanied my rhythm and melody which is why I read all my verse out load

My first short story will be coming your way either later this evening, or tomorrow, sleeplessgurl.

Thank you once again for taking the time to resond, your advice and help is greatly appreciated.

Jonathan Wolfe

hopefully into the future, TK U MLJ LV NV

fuchsin/Anaïs Nin? amuses me, chemist?

Secret parts deliquescent

and i thought i could get weird.

good luck